Saturday, June 14, 2003
So what do poets from the
school of quietude mean when they say that they’re “more traditional,” if in
fact their tradition is no longer, & may even be shorter, than that of
post-avant poetries? I think that traditional
in this sense means this: always already familiar.
What these poetries have in
common, with a very few exceptions (virtually all from the vicinity of
ellipticism), is consistency of viewpoint, narrative or expository lines that
are treated as unproblematic, language that integrates upwards to meta-levels such
as character, plot or theme. Most of these poetries are set up to avoid at all
costs that which the Russian Formalists called ostranenie
& Brecht later characterized as the alienation-
or A-effect, the admonition to make
it new, make it strange. As Shklovsky put it in Art as Technique back in 1917,
The technique of art is to make
objects “unfamiliar,” to make forms difficult, to increase the difficulty and
length of perception because the process of perception is an aesthetic end in
itself and must be prolonged.
Post-avant poetries, whether
happy-go-lucky Actualism, furrowed brow langpo, or the post-Oulipo linguistic
pyrotechnics of a Christian Bök, all have this in common. It was true of Emily
Dickinson & William Blake & it’s true today of Jim Behrle & Mary
Burger. To the school of quietude, however, this approach is virtually the Sign
of the Beast.
Thus Daisy Fried
characterized post-avant poetics as “anti-coherency”
when in fact this tendency has a consistently more rigorous approach to the
question of coherence than does its opposite, which simply presumes it. Chris Lott characterizes the Other as
indicative of a sense that only
what is new and experimental (excuse my lack of precision here, but I think the
idea is clear enough) can be any good.
Lott’s ability to insert clarity & precision as though they were the opposites of new and experimental is an especially adept touch.
Of Noah Eli Gordon’s
exclusion from an anti-war reading in Amherst, Matthew
Zapruder wrote,
I guess it just comes down to whether
or not one is willing to grant that the notion of “difficulty” has any place at
all in poetry. That’s an interesting discussion, and one worth having here and
elsewhere. But in this particular case, right or wrong, the organizers of that
reading in good faith seem to believe in that distinction, and genuinely
thought that Noah’s poem was too difficult to work effectively in that
situation.
Zapruder’s characterization
of the situation is most compelling, precisely because what he finds troubling
is exactly that which Shklovsky – whose influence on linguistics through Roman
Jacobson &, through Jacobson, the Prague School of Linguistics & later
the New School for Social Research, on everything from New Criticism through
Structuralism, was profound – identifies as the fundamental dynamic of art. In
short, the problem that the organizers’ of that particular reading had with Gordon’s poetry was that it was poetry. They wanted to ensure an
experience of something else altogether.
Lott’s conception of poetry
as a pure spectrum, with “experimentation” at one end & maybe the old new
formalism at the other, is a world without history. His music analogy presumes
that one could switch seamlessly between poets the way one might between the
jazz of John Zorn, the country music of Dolly Parton, Eminmem’s white boy rap
& some arias from Tosca by Placido Domingo. In point of fact, if you really
appreciate David Pavelich’s poetry, the verse of Philip Levine is going to appear
bloated & full of posturing, brimming with bad faith & false
consciousness. Ray Carver won’t fare a whole lot better, though Bob Hass &
Marie Ponsot will. I’ve argued before & will happily do so again that the
general aesthetics of the school of quietude are so ass backwards that whenever
somebody from that context does write well, they virtually have to be a genius.
They really are making a silk purse out of a sow’s ear & all the more power
to them for that.
But it has been the school
of quietude’s near stranglehold on certain economic
institutions, particularly of the small press scene that poses as trade
publishing in America, secondarily of a number of the awards programs, finally
of all too many university curricula, that transforms these antimodernists from
merely being the verse equivalent of the Harlequin novel into something more
heavy handed & sinister. The requirement of kitsch that is at the heart of
the poetry programs of The Atlantic, the
New Yorker, The Nation & like-minded organizations is one thing. But
the school of quietude’s insistence that this “part of the spectrum” then be
taken seriously reminds me of something far more like the garden party scene in
The Manchurian Candidate than
anything else. Sgt. Raymond Shaw (Laurence Harvey) is not a good model for a
critical reader, but he has the school of quietude routine down pat. The
behavior that Ange Mlinko complained of on Thursday, which has been documented
so many times that it goes beyond the ridiculous – begin with Jed Rasula’s The American Poetry Wax Museum &
proceed to Hank Lazer’s Opposing
Poetries, especially vol. one – has all the characteristics of cultural
genocide. What is curious is that Lott seems surprised that people have
emotions about this sort of behavior.
Finally, the school of
quietude claiming any heritage from the likes of Emily Dickinson & Walt
Whitman is not merely disingenuous & silly, it raises to the level of
consciousness just what these antimodernists would most like to forget – that
only period specialists in the academy still read the likes of Whittier,
Holmes, Bryant, Sidney Lanier & James Russell Lowell, their real tradition. How exactly do these poets imagine that their
fate will be any different?
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Friday, June 13, 2003
For the past couple of days,
ever since I got Chris Lott’s email, I’ve been drafting & redrafting a
response. I haven’t been happy with any of them.
I’m not unsympathetic with
Lott’s quandary. Certainly not by comparison with Ange Mlinko
yesterday. It’s apparent to anybody who reads Lott’s blog that he’s serious, well
intentioned & open to a wider than usual range of writing. I believe him
completely when he writes that
it is downright disheartening to feel as if that which one
loves is not just being supplemented by another kind of beauty, but being
downright beset as a relic of tradition that is holding the art back.
Lott’s desire for a
completely ecumenical approach to poetry in which one might read David
Pavelich, then Philip Levine, Raymond Carver, then
Yet, now the note of sadness, what has happened is a
peculiar myopia. I say this over and over, but one of the strangest, saddest?,
things that is the result of this wealth is not that it is hard for readers,
but that so few of these poetries talk to each other. So language poets and
Nation language /
Yet there are two aspects of
Lott’s complaint that strike me as troubling. One is its assumption that one
poetry is “more traditional” than another – Lott’s problem being that this is
taken by some post-avant poets as a pejorative. Rereading the same exchange
with
In the
I’m more intrigued at the
idea that one often gets from school of quietude poets that their work also
extends back in American letters to Dickinson or Whitman, when their own poetry
so often appears to have been written at least one century earlier than either
of these masters. One way to fully appreciate just how radical Dickinson is as
a poet, even within the post-avant framework, is to read Michael Magee’s
brilliant ongoing work, My Angie Dickinson, which
appropriates Emily’s forms for a contemporary content. The way I read this work
is that Magee is doing the same sort of “parallelogram” with
So I think there are two
things occurring when poets claim that one tendency is “more traditional” than
another. The first is a certain amount of obfuscation. School of Quietude poetry
is not traditional in the sense of fitting into that heritage, but rather extending from a different literary
narrative altogether, one that was for so many decades opposed to precisely such writing: Whittier, Holmes, Bryant, Sidney
Lanier & James Russell Lowell, for starters.
“Traditional” in the way
it’s used by SoQ poets doesn’t in fact mean working within a tradition. Rather,
it’s a stance toward the role of change within art that is most often being
staked out by such a term. Change is not easy for anyone but in the SoQ world,
it’s positively excruciating. Remember how dramatic the writing of the young
Brahmins in the 1950s & ‘60s who revolted – Bly, Merwin, Plath, Rich, in
particular – was perceived to have been. Adrienne Rich, for example, chose to
publish the title poem of her breakthrough Diving
into the Wreck in Clayton Eshleman’s journal Caterpillar, not because Eshleman has ever been considered a
paragon of feminist politics, but because the alternatives available to her at
the time were so very few.
Case in point: David Ossman,
better known these days for his work as part of the Firesign Theatre, published
a collection of interviews in 1963 entitled The
Sullen Art, taken from a series of WBAI radio interviews he had done in
1960-61. In his introduction, Ossman quotes from Gilbert Sorrentino that “the
new poets are not a bunch of illiterate, barbaric, slightly criminal types,” & addresses the
issue of the two tendencies in American writing:
It would be unfortunate,
however, to consider these writers members of a single “avant-garde” clique.
They are two individual and independent to be taken for an organized junta in
opposition to what has been variously called “The Academy” and “The
Establishment.” Not only have many of them been teachers, but their books,
published and in preparation, total some 60 volumes. It is too bad that
American poetry today appears to fall into two distinct camps.
Ossman’s gathering of 14 anti-establishmentarians – 13 men
& Denise Levertov – include not only Rexroth, Creeley, Ginsberg, Dorn,
LeRoi Jones, Paul Blackburn,
The idea of
In reality, Bly, Merwin
& the other rebel Brahmins were little more than a reaction formation
created by the excitement of the New American Poetry – their recognition was
that, in order to save the school of quietude, they had to change it. This they
did mostly by importing the verse of the SoQ’s
spiritual & literary cousins from
I said that there were two
aspects to Lott’s plahn that bothered me. I’ll get to the other tomorrow.
* Almost as
puzzling today as the presence of Bly, Merwin & Logan in Ossman’s anthology is the absence of any
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Thursday, June 12, 2003
Ange Mlinko
has a response to Chris Lott’s email yesterday.
Dear
Ron,
I
have often wanted to drop you a note saying how much I liked this or that in
the blog, but the exigencies of new parenthood limit my time on web and email. I
am, however, so outraged by the letter you posted in your blog today that I
have to, well, spew. You know how it is when Republicans maintain a
pseudo-embattled stance in the face of the liberal "elite"? It's not
enough that the school of quietude, the school of
broken-up-plainspoken-prose-is-so-poetry,
the school of "John
Thanks
for letting me rage.
Best,
Ange
I don’t
entirely agree with Ange (maybe it’s because I have appeared in The Paris Review), so I will add my own two cents tomorrow & the next day.
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Wednesday, June 11, 2003
Chris Lott, who blogs Ruminate, and I traded emails. Here
is Chris’ take on things.
On
Thanks for reminding me. It's been awhile since
I looked at your site. I'll post your note on my blog tomorrow. And I may
answer that "more traditional" comment later in the week. I actually
don't think it's possible for poets to more or less traditional, only to
respond to different traditions.
I'd be interested to hear more about being more or less
"traditional." I just posted a note to some friends about your
response to a letter from
I took a pretty typical path for someone my age (early
30's) to learn about reading and writing poetry: introduced to the old masters
in high school, immediately took to writing my own poems and stories, went to
college and changed majors 100 times on the way to degrees in English Lit and
Philosophy, emphasizing "contemporary" poetry in the former and pomo lit theory in the latter. As such, I have had what I
guess to be the "school of quietude" inculcated as part of the
curriculum.
In this respect, poetry blogs are all that they are
supposed to be – were it not for following hints of threads through your site
and a number of others in the same constellation, I would remain relatively
unaware of a vast swath of poetry and poetics from the last 30 years.
Daisy
Fried's letter, and your response, interested me
because it seemed to be the clearest articulation yet of where I find myself in
relation to a lot of this new work. It also strikes me, reading through a lot
of these logs, that there seems to be a lot of vitriol towards that which isn't
new and avant-garde. Is this just a natural consequence of feeling slighted by
the academy and the teachers who influence so many when it comes to learning
what poetry is? Or is it indicative of a sense that only what is new and
experimental (excuse my lack of precision here, but I think the idea is clear
enough) can be any good? One blogger mentioned Ray Carver and felt compelled to
write a parenthetical (get out of my weblog, Raymond Carver) as if he had
committed some avant-garde sin by acknowledging someone who simply wrote some
good work out of a different tradition.
Whatever club there is that I am catching glimpses of
through these weblogs and journals may never want me as a member. I'm not sure
I could pass the "anti-tradition" check at the door, as attached as I
am to some artists that seem to receive nothing but sneering contempt at the
hands of the new elite within. I'm sure there are artists of every stripe who
want nothing to do with any work that is outside of their comfort zone – I know
I have heard the supposition that some of the poets you write about are
willfully obscure, and I have theorized myself about some artists that their
finished work is "the beginning of a poem that just needs some time put in
to be crafted into something worthwhile" – but then again, I have said the
same thing about poems that are as traditional as they come.
I guess it's disconcerting to be jarred out of one's
comfort zone when it comes to the art they love. But it is downright
disheartening to feel as if that which one loves is not just being supplemented
by another kind of beauty, but being downright beset as a relic of tradition
that is holding the art back. I have this same kind of relationship with music.
I'm a lover of a certain era of jazz. But I find myself enamored of many kinds
of music. There are some listeners who are able to cope with that,
and others that feel the same way. But there are some for whom it is not enough
to know what they love, they feel a need to degrade all that which is outside
of that set and in the process denigrate the people who believe otherwise. I
think it should be just fine to love David Pavelich and Philip Levine, or be
moved by the frustration and tension in a Carver poem one minute and admire the
subtle craftsmanship of
If kinds of poetry form a spectrum, I'd like to think that
ideally we don't have to fall in any one place. Instead we should be visible as
an absorption spectrum is in the physical world – with affinities that can and
should fall in many different areas, some singly and delicate, others clustered
and strong, but not limited to any one place, time, or type.
c
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Tuesday, June 10, 2003
Sometimes a new book, or a
book by a new poet, raises all kinds of interesting questions. Even when it’s not a book, but a pack of cards in a translucent
envelope.
From Aeschylus to Eugene
O’Neill, the Eumenides, better known as the Furies,
& Lavinia are characters that have turned up again & again. In Michael
Cross’s lime green chap envelope from
A second device carried it
even further. Cross physically marks the caesura in each line with a slash (/),
creating a subtler version of the disruptive typography that cleaves the seen
from the heard than, say, Alice Notley’s use of scare quotes throughout her
1996 The Descent of Alette, but still
functions in that same general terrain. Thus, the first card of text in my
stack, under the heading of “lavinia,” reads
I still / my hologram
and sheen
skin / my caustic
shining / I am
miniature
in sun /
covered in little
bulbs / a
moment
on this
bed / of leaves
we are
outside / the warmed dark
inside my
thighs / is warmth
One of the things the slash
does for/to me as a reader is to accentuate the connection of the latter
portion of line A with the first segment of line B. Thus at some level my mind hears the text something more like this:
I still
my
hologram and sheen skin
my
caustic shining
I am miniature in sun
covered in
little bulbs
a moment
on this bed
of leaves
we are outside
the warmed
dark inside my thighs
is warmth
Or possibly with each
segment as its own set:
I still
my
hologram
and sheen
skin
my
caustic
shining
I am miniature
in sun
covered in little
bulbs
a moment
on this
bed
of leaves
we are
outside
the warmed
dark
inside my
thighs
is warmth
Prosodically at least, it’s
a very different poem depending on how you interpret the impact of these marks.
This last version is almost Creeley-esque in its
enjambments whereas, in the second version,” a unit like “the warmed dark
inside my thighs” runs fairly smoothly.
Yet it is clear that the
first version, the one on the card itself, is the version Cross
intends/intended. So what does it mean to set up some many visual (if not also
aural) barriers in the text?
One trend in poetry that has
followed the evolution of free verse has been, at least in English (at least in
American English), a general
shortening of the line. Part of this is
the caesurae starting to blend in with the linebreak, their various effects
conjoining & becoming more supple. You see it
first in Zukofsky & others of his generation who often would read their
works aloud pausing at the end of every second line (whereas Williams’ readings,
like Marianne Moore’s, never reflected any audible correlation to his
linebreaks at all). Creeley really marks the sense of the line break
determining all else more than anyone, even Olson who was more doctrinaire (and
whose poems often sound as tho they’re picking up momentum as the lines get
shorter & shorter – his longest lines are often at the very beginning of
the text).
Conversely, I can’t think of
any new formalist who is “doing something interesting” with caesurae. Maybe
that’s my general lack of reading of the new formalists, but it might also be
new formalism’s general disinterest in (gasp!) form. Cross clearly is doing
something interesting here. Kasey Mohammad, who reviewed in
felt treeling first, calls it “the question of syntactic instability,”
but that’s not how I read it. Multiplicity is more like it.
I should note that there are
12 cards in Cross’ set, eight of which have two such sets or poems. Whenever
they are paired, eumenides speaks
first, lavinia after & the sections appear one
atop the other on the card, literally paired. There are, I believe, only two
lines in the entire work that do not carry slashes, one from each “speaker.” A
number, however, appear to be “half-lines,” with a slash either at the
beginning or end – &, when at the beginning, invariably starting well to
the right of the margin. Mohammad terms the slash a “virgule,” as it would be
if it appeared in a phrase such as either/or,
but I don’t this being how the mark operates here, so will stick the more
generic slash. After rejecting more pomo alternatives, e.g. wound, barrier, wall, spike.
Since at least
Cross runs the New Brutalism
reading series in
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Monday, June 09, 2003
School is out and this
blog’s daily hit rate has dropped somewhere around five percent. There went the
people who read this because their professor told them they needed to do so.
Given that this is the point in the calendar when academics are least likely to
think seriously about anything, the Chronicle of
Higher Medication certainly chose an inauspicious moment to publish an
article on “Scholars
Who Blog.” The article in & of itself is predictable enough – it
warrants skimming more than a deep read – but it offers some links to
critically minded bloggers, as well as interesting statistics on some of the
sites it does cover. Of the two sites it points to with scholarly blogrolls, Rhetorica
appears to have the most diverse & inclusive list.
Two of the academic blogs in
particular caught my eye, in part because both are from Penn, one of the “home”
teams here in the Philadelphia region & a school that has treated me well
since I moved east in 1995. One of these blogs is Critical Mass by Erin O’Conner, a Victorianist (if that’s a word) in the English Department,
while the other is anonymously penned under the title The Invisible Adjunct. Both are
exceptionally intelligent & well written, and both spend a lot of energy
chronicling & analyzing all the ways in which the feudal institution that
is Higher Education is destructive to the lives of the people who try to live
& work there. Given the degree to which many of this blog’s readers – &
poets generally – live in & around the academy, these blogs & some of
their recent links are worth considering.
Two articles worth reading
are “So You Want to
Go to Grad School?” by Thomas. H.
Benton, which also ran in the Chronicle,
and John Sutherland’s, “The
Silent Scandal” which appeared in The
Guardian (which may just well be the finest newspaper in the English
language*). Both articles focus on the same general problem – that graduate schools turn out far more “product” than the
market can bear. There are today over 300 creative writing programs in the
United States, but you know perfectly well that there will not be 300 jobs
waiting for creative writing faculty at December’s MLA meat market. And that
would still be just one job per school. A study reported on by the BBC even
concludes that “Arts
Degrees ‘Reduce Earnings’”:
Graduates in these
subjects - including history and English - could expect to make between 2% and
10% less than those who quit education at 18, researchers at
That’s right. A degree in
English or the arts is worth less in
the
Some other blogs are devoted
to tenure track horror stories, such as “My Brooklyn College Tenure Battle”
by K.C. Johnson & Bob Uttl’s aptly named “The Worst Years of My Life.” Kevin Walzer is both a new
formalist poet as well as a disappointed
Ph.D. Only slightly more hopeful is Scott Smallwood’s “The Path to a Ph.D. – and
Beyond,” but Smallwood focuses on a top-tier school & virtually every
study notes that the difference between the results of the few elite schools
and the vast majority is profound. Just to make the point that these issues are
not simply the whining of a few malcontents wedded to the culture of
victimization, you can find a link to the AAUP’s 2001
study, “Does
Collegiality Count?” Which focuses on what may be
considered in the tenure decision, although it doesn’t explore fully just how
far “collegiality,” which can mean everything from “plays well with others” to
brown-nosing to submitting silently to all manner of sexual harassment, might
extend. A 1988 article in the Chronicle
noted that even then, “Embittered by a Bleak Job
Market, Graduate Students Take on the MLA.” Not with much success, however. Finally, if
one makes it all the way to tenure track at an elite institution, Stanley Fish
– who certainly should know – advises everyone to “Aim Low.” That’s
sort of the ultimate commencement address realpolitik.
* Consider The Guardian’s decision to chronicle the
lives of those who died during the war on
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On a happier blogging note,
the story of Salam Pax has taken a
few new unusual turns. First, the semi-anonymous gay architecture student in
Also worth checking out is Radio Sawa, the U.S.
propaganda radio network in Iraq.
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